Writing

Family can really influence peoples choices. It could b anything from wanting to buy something or wanting to go somewhere or even eating food. For example a 15 year old might want to attend a party with 17 and 18 year olds but your family thinks its a bad idea or alcohol will be there. That can effect their choices because if you let them act and do what they want they might start making bad choices. 

This piece of writing shows I have been improving my vocabulary 

For example I have used attend instead of go to