My Writing

A Paragraph of my writing...

“Devin and Edward I have another contract for you two,” Said Nazz’ar. “Let me see” said Devin feeling excited for another contract as he reached over and snatched the piece of paper with the contract details on it. Devin had a surprised look on his face and went pale when he saw the name in bold Duncan Thornside then showed Edward in shock they gave each other a look and Edward quickly said. “It will be done.”

Then Edward pulled Devin outside and said.

“Do you know the consequence for refusing to fulfill a contract.” “Yes, death.” Said Devin thinking about what happened to others who had done that very thing.

My Goal Was to Elaborate my ideas to include description of characters, settings and important events.
I Have used this sample because when they got given the contract I stated the feeling used an action used a description and used dialogue.