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Writing Parody Recount

Everything highlighted green is where I used clauses and I think I am at Relational because i need to seek feedback.

I saw her staring at the kids with disgusted eyes, and hands in a fist, I could tell she hated them and they were everything to me. She had to go.

I decided I would hire someone to take care of her, for good, so I went to a professional, a ghost witch, but when I told her about my problem she said I had to give her the kids or she wouldn’t do it, so I decided I would do it myself so I went to bed that night knowing what I had to do.

Writing Hansel And Gretel Parody

Everything highlighted green are where I added clauses.

Once upon a time there was two kids, one evil stepmother and one father. One day the stepmother had had enough of the two kids so she got the Father to take them to the forest on a sunny afternoon and leave them there with only a pack of tic tac things that one of the kids found, the kids names were Hansel and Gretel, Hansel had dark brown hair with very dark blonde eyebrows. Gretel also had dark brown hair in a ponytail but with black eyebrows.  

“I’m sorry said the Father, but I have to do this.”

“Please don’t” said Hansel, with tears in his eyes as their Father left them in the forest. With a quick slap around the face from Gretel, Hansel was ready and focused. They could hear the birds tweeting and the leaves falling from the trees. “We need to find somewhere to stay the night,” said Gretel. “Its getting dark,” said Hansel. “I'm afraid of the dark,” said Hansel again with an unsteady voice. “We can leave a trail of the tic tac things in your pocket,” said Gretel. Just incase we get lost. So after hours of traveling in the dark scary forest, leaving a trail of tic tac’s behind them, they eventually found a large tree and decided to stay there for awhile so they put the tic tacs by the tree and went to sleep for the freezing cold night.

Hansel woke to a strange “NOM NOM” noise that was coming from the tree then heard a scream from Gretel as they jumped up ready to face the attacker but in that same moment the attacker revealed himself to be a circular yellow monster with a big mouth and big eyes. Hansel and Gretel froze, then ran for their life through the forest towards a house tall made of lollies and sweets, like a gingerbread house with a candyfloss garden out the front and a marshmallow doorbell, but didn’t bother pressing it.

They ran right through the door to be greeted by a old lady with long white hair and pale skin. then the ghost witch told them to calm down and eat some chocolate so Hansel started to dig in to the candy but Gretel was still terrified by the yellow monster they saw and didn’t eat so that got the old lady very mad and she then revealed herself to being a ghost witch and tried to throw them into the oven that was burning hot, almost singeing off the kids eyebrows. As they were about to get cooked when suddenly out of nowhere the yellow monster smashed through the wall and gobbled down the witch. All you could hear was “NOM! NOM! NOM!” then the house and the ghost witch were gone and the yellow monster burped loudly then introduced himself to the kids, to be Pacman.

By Ben Browne

Maths

WALT: Recognize 2 similar shapes, find scale factor and use to find lengths.
Say these where the shape measurements.

3 km 1 km

9 km h

h =  kilometers

The answer is 3 because 3 times what = 9 is 3

 

Leadership

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