Writing Parody Recount

Everything highlighted green is where I used clauses and I think I am at Relational because i need to seek feedback.

I saw her staring at the kids with disgusted eyes, and hands in a fist, I could tell she hated them and they were everything to me. She had to go.

I decided I would hire someone to take care of her, for good, so I went to a professional, a ghost witch, but when I told her about my problem she said I had to give her the kids or she wouldn’t do it, so I decided I would do it myself so I went to bed that night knowing what I had to do.