Discussion
WALT: I can write a sentence with a variety of starters and calluses.
Eventually after thinking long and hard, my opinion is that business have more responsibility. Business have lots of customers they have to deal with that means lots of problems. Most business will try there best to keep their customers happy so they come back. Also if someone buys the wrong product the consumer could ask somebody who works at the shop about the product, finally if the consumer buys a fake product online they could check with the shop if the site looks dodgy.
Where it is highlighted green are the connectives and there are clauses throughout
I believe I am at Extended abstracted because I can seek feedback and work with it.
My next step is to move on to another goal
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